Great animator, bad director
The cartoon was EXTREMELY well drawn and animated - all I can say is wow. The style was superb as well as the exaggeration such as the size of the Axis soldier's head compared to his helmet, etc. Very well done. As for the flow of the cartoon, well there was hardly any. The scenes didn't really fit together well at all and I didn't get any sort of sense as to why the hell exactly a bunch of penguins were stealing top secret german war equipment and using it to steal beer and snacks. Just didn't exactly fit. Anyway, keep drawing and animating - you've got some serious talent - but get someone else to come up with a storyboard (or start using one).