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A trip to Luzhotel A trip to Luzhotel

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Creative but author needs practice

I enjoyed the game, I thought the use of choice buttons was good. The plot fit together - somewhat - but didn't really flow as well as it could have. I know one shouldn't expect an epic film from a flash animation, but I thought it was a little corny how after the volleyball exploded, Bob and Maria just sort of passed it off as a 'oh well, lets go rent a boat.' The first scene was more realistic.

It was creative and original, unlike quite a bit of bullshit people make, but you definately need some flash practice. Also, never label things like the boat that said "Boat with no gas," that's just plain unneccesary. Please practice your tweens, making multiple tweens for one movement to give the animation a more believable visual representation. Anyhow, keep up the good work - with some practice, I can see some pretty entertaining stuff coming from you.

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